JORDAN'S DAY

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Why almost? I know that the beauty and overall value of this picture is in the imperfection in regard of visibility, recognizability, sharpness...etc. But, the imperfection must be also perfect. I would suggest erasing of the brighter line in the right bottom corner and the spot between the nose (on the nose too) and the lips, on the right cheek! It will be then perfect!

 

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Thanks for the recommendations. I'll work on it. rek

This is real life...sometimes, making things better, does not make them better. Ok, I know, I am making a whole lot of sense! This is very well done! Wait, as I look at it again, I might just do the one on her nose and her cheek. Leave the rest...in my (apparently; changing by the moment)opinion!