Elysa

For your comments

A very good job of lighting the model. The light is very flattering. It appears you may have used a reflector at her back?

I like the pose and the expression. I think the lighting is very good except for the highlight on the upper portion of her breast. It is distracting or counter the rest of the image in two respects. The high tonal value seems to be at odds with the rest of the image, and it also creates a hard line/edge against the background. Either cropping just above where the bright light at the top of her breast/bottom edge of her shoulder overlap, or reducing the tonal value of the highlight on her breast to about the same as the highlight portion of her shoulder make this a stronger image to me. The model has a very mysterious expression and the light on her face is a perfect compliment.