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For a personal/school project on consumerism. Critique is more than

welcome.

Kind of overdone concept, but it looks good. It looks very sleek, but the photoshopping of the exact same cups is a little too obvious.

Immediately eye-catching and seemingly sharp. Depth of field seems great. Josh must have gotten that view camera. Only when blown up does sharpness become questionable--a tribute to good lighting. (Or is the photo a jpg, resolution reduced?) The eye is led into the photo by the stream of coffee containers. BUT that eye is also distracted out of frame by the bright-green, almost highlit, straw poking outward. Where's it going? The eyes come back in, but then--what is that square thing in the back? Setup for a slide show?

 

Ah, picky picky.

 

A commendation for not having melting goo dribbling down the side of the container. Used strobe to keep heat down, right?

 

Thanks for allowing a practice critique.