Rule of Third

Resubmitted after suggested improvements. Please rate and critique.

have since gone to look at your first one & yes, this is much better..

excellent compo & exposure! I could see this hanging on a wall :)

GREAT 7\7

A fascinating image.

:)Gorm

Very nice!

 

simple idea but very nicely done and well composed, good job!, regards, RK!

Very interesting composition!

Great idea and execution!! My best regards!

Original work,great work Atanu,best regards

You make excellent use of the simple subject in our dily life into a piece of fine artwork. Brilliant idea & presentation.

Superb !

Back to your photos after a really long time...amazing photos, some of them. This one is really one with superb concept and execution.

Excellent, very creative idea! Congratulations!

A nice photo. I would like to see the unimproved version and comments written for it since it would be educational. I looked at your portfolio but no luck. Could you please e-mail me a link if it is still avaible?

Anyway, about this one. The framing is carefully made I see from the symmetry of the details at corners. The photo honors the name of rule of thirds since the broken eggs are perfectly placed. The natural monochromatic tones of the overall image compliments the color created by the broken eggs. 

May I suggest another version of this image which is attached below. I just increased the contrast a little. I also added some yellow saturation for two purposes: One is yellow saturation is not only making the broken eggs look more lively but also adds some detail to the yellow parts of them actually. Second benefit of the mentioned adjustment is enhancing the color contrast which is already present at the image. The cartoon of eggholder and the whites of the eggs are slightly blue tinted which is natural and fitting I believe. Therefore enhancing yellows make the photo look better by boosting the color contrast between yellow which is a warm color and blue which is a cold color.

A very good photo. Congratulations.

Some people are really creative! Such a creative sweet photo and fun to watch. Regards