nudes My First Nude. Model Giorgia

Model Giorgia.

Critiques are welcome!

Lovely detail and fantastic context. Great shot.

Well Massimo, if this is your "first" nude, then you are most certainly on the right path !

 

 

Excellent composition and pose by the model which is very well placed in the frame. I would be tempted to move in just a little closer to the scene, notably removing just a fraction from the top and to the right, but these are details and just a subjective view.

 

Bravo Massimo, hope to see much more work in this area.

 

Massimo, excellent job on your first nude. Composition and tonality are very good. The theme and mood are very good. I look forward to seeing more from you. -Michael

Massimo, A very creative image for your first!! Many of the elements contribution to the overall feel of this one. The one detail I think distracts are your models shoes. The shoes seem out of place with the other elements of the photo. That might have been your intent! Still a beautiful capture. Best Regards, Doug

Massimo,

 

A very, very good "first nude"; you are certainly on the right path.

 

Beautiful model, well lit (actually, I like the shoes), incredible backdrop to set her against. I would have cropped some from the left, and quite a bit from the right, to bring more focus on her, yet still maintaining the feel of the image.

 

All in all, very good, and a 6/6 from me.

 

klenwood

I like the shoes too.

I agree with Jorge, and I superadd the architecture, which I like too !!!!!!!!!!!

Bella foto ! Interessante la location, dov'蠿

 

Una Bellissima Immagine.

Nudo delicato.

 

A little closer as Peri suggested would be nice. Again the shoes are out of place. They detract from the composition in my opinion. Lovely image regardless.

 

Jim

Thanks for your opinion Jim. I agree, the images may be better with barefoot model but the floor was very dirty and pieces of rusty iron everywhere

Understandable. I usually have a little wisk broom with me and sweep where I wish to place the model. I am anxious to see more of your stuff. These are very good and fit well within my tastes.

 

Jim

spettacolo della natura!!! che dire, ti ho commentato tutta la serie... sei molto bravo. ciao