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santer36

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Since you asked for critiques, I will offer my observations for whatever they're worth. I like the angle and the basic approach to the shot. I also like her blouse both for the color and the bead work. It might have been a good idea to focus tightly on the beads from different angles for a somewhat more abstract image.

 

There are a number of things that you might want to consider changing. She has a particularly large blemish on her breast that is distracting and could easily be removed in editing software. The shot also feels underexposed rather than moody. Lighting a shot like this is tricky and you might want to experiment more to find just the right setup. The striped cloth behind her head is distracting. Finally, I wonder if this would be improved if you had set up the shot so that her lower stomach didn't show up... the bright blue at the bottom of the frame draws attention from her bust and face where you want it to be.

 

I realize that I've made quite a few critical observations but I also meant it when I said that I like the basic approach to the shot and I hope you won't take offense. I normally wouldn't post something like this but you seemed to want the feedback. Best of luck, and keep shooting!

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