Hands manipulating a phone

Hi, this is the first dummy of an image I'm working on, still needs a

lot of work, but I wanted your input in these previous stages.

 

Thanks!

 

Ignacio

Fun piece ! In France we say that italians speak a lot with their hands... So I guess these are italian hands, right ? :-) As for the technique, only two small things bother me a little:

 

1) The shadow on the arm of the 2 left hands - i.e the shadow is not placed at the same area on the top and bottom part.

 

2) At right: The top hand is much smaller and therefore seems too far away from the bottom hand, given the visual length of the arm that joins/separates them.

 

Not sure whether I'm clear, but if i'm not, let me know, and I'll try to rephrase. Anyway, it's a great idea, and well worth that little extra work. Regards.

Thanks Marc, like I said, this is a work in progress, I appreciate your comment and will try to work on that for the final image.