Mixed Moods

Jim, I very much like the idea as you already know. I wonder in this particular shot if there is not too much going on? I left it and came back to look again, but I still don't seem to be able to focus on any single message. Love the colouring and the expressions caught, I just can't somehow make it fit together this time. I know that you will appreciate my candid response to this image, and that you also know that I look forward to seeing more work in the area.

All the best Jim, John