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I haven't been in this hobby/profession/obsession very long, so take this for what it's worth, but on the whole, this is nice. I like the tonal range in it, and the framing is good as well - I like the fact that both the base and the tips are out of frame and the lines of the plant are more abstracted. To a certain extent, however, the subject begs to be centered, and the fact that it is a little off to the left throws my eye off a bit. If it were either cropped or recomposed such that the base of the plant was either centered or definitively off ot the side so that the lines from the leaves were bursting from bottom center or in a fan from the bottom corner, I feel it would work a bit better. Here's an alternative version with a bit of the right cropped. It's not totally centered, but close, and for me at least, it seems more pleasing.

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It looks quite dark on my screen, but I think it could be quite nice with some adjustments of lightness. The 'off center' framing seems really good to me.
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I love all your work. This especially well done. I love the abtract nature and the lack of color drives this image to tecture and pattern. Very appealing.
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