lex_jenkins 13 Posted November 29, 2010 I like the dynamics and lines, but wonder whether the balcony is superfluous. Might work better with the top cropped just below the balcony. Seems to emphasize the motion and lines, and the bit of humorous juxtaposition of the two major blue-black elements - the umbrella with the pedestrian heading one direction and the blue sign with an arrow pointing the other direction. Link to comment
allancobb 4,052 Posted November 30, 2010 Thanks Lex for your excellent detailed critique! I struggled somewhat about the balcony also, but at the time decided to keep it in to emphasize the shabbiness of the alleyway... but overall, that may have been too much for the point of the photo. Thanks again! Allan Link to comment
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