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critical comments welcome

fantastic photo !!

 

~trish~

Wonderful...

Gran composicion,excelente textura del color y muy buen detalle el pie levantado sobre la arena, y la sombra que sale de este.Una gran foto.

 

Bravo!:-)

Wow!!! It's so much more enticing with the inclusion of a human into the scene. Congratulations!

Nice composition, and the inclusion of a person with the strong diagonal shadow is a nice touch. My only suggestion would be to crop the photo from the top to get rid of the light area in the upper right, which draws the eye, and leave just enough of the black shadow area to add a bit of mystery...... I think this simplifies the picture and makes the lines more graphic.

thanks a lot for your comments.

 

bill, that's a very interesting alternative you are showing. it is formally more coherent that way, though i still think that the contrasting dark part at the top is not so bad either

I like original, the placement of the figure compositionwise is better, very nice light and shadows, especially the diagonal . The texture in the FG adds richness as well.