andre arment 0 Posted August 12, 2007 Picture taken at Serpong West Java, Indonesia. People activities in the Sunday Morning. Link to comment
sasha_bulovic 0 Posted August 12, 2007 Great catch of morning light... Wonderful framing... Well done... ;-) Sasha Link to comment
davidlong 0 Posted August 12, 2007 I agree that the light is very nice, and the framing is also good. What I think the photo lacks is a really coherent subject. Everyone seems to be going somewhere, but there's no single person or small group to focus on. Something like a single person who is closer, or who is going in the opposite direction to the rest, would help to anchor the photo. Right now the picture strikes me as being more about the light than about anything else, and I think it's very hard for light alone to hold a picture together. Link to comment
ianward 0 Posted August 12, 2007 Beautiful moment captured very well. I thik the lighting is superb and for me the picture works very well. It is full of subjects that are unaware that the photo is being taken, which all adds to the final scene. To have a closer central subject would ruin the sense of a completely natural scene anonymously taken. Link to comment
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