Lawang Sewu Girl

please critique and comments, thanks

You may even split the image in 2 parts, the left part is worth seeing stand alone , beautiful.

Splendid, the long corridor perspective create the mood, and the lighting on the model is simply amazing. Low perspective worked here really well. 6/6

nice wrok.

Excellent composition!

Cheers,Jim

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Perfect!!!

excellent

WOw this is just great , I love this composition , It is just like a movie .

Very cinematic and even symbolic!

Beautiful work with excellent light!

Hi Kenvin - Your portfolio is full of mystery and drama. So beautiful! Cheers on lovely work! - Kerry

Exceptional work ..... keep going

Tremendous work. Your entire portfolio is a knock out...but because of the limitations to 24hours in a day...I can only comment on a few. The light is sensational...just bright enough. Just dark enough. The mystery and shape of her environment bring my eyes to one point and then force them to sweep around the image to bring in more. Really sensational stuff.

Hello Kenvin . The lights and darks in your composition are greats . Regards Dan .

This is at least two fantastic images in one! Excellent work, and quite stunning!

I love the separation here. There are almost two separate images, though together they form a great composition. You handled the dual light sources with great skill to counter the almost inevitable hotspots.