Birds in a pet store.

Considering a 16 year old took this photo, how does it look?

Hola Marla, la composicion, el encuadre y los colores me gustan. Lo unico que desentona un poco en mi modesta opinion, es la excesiva oscuridad de la derecha, de todas formas es una opinion personal y aun asi la considero una toma interesante.

 

Un cordial saludo -Tolo.

Hi Marla, I think this photo has tons of potential as a very very good shot. I think it needs to be cropped about in half to get rid of the gunk on the right, and maybe some from the top. I love the way just one eye of each bird is photographed. Good job. Peace, Jeanne

http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o182/marlabmarrs/BIRD3.jpg

Marla, the focus doesn't seem to be on the birds but the cage. I really like the colors and birds' pose on the 2nd version. Best regards

I like the first one better myself.