people,portrait,street ***

A very engaging image. We might be suprised by which one's soul gets saved!

The face looks really nice, the light stresses the expression, but there is too much chaos here - the other girl, the hand spoils this composition.

To me, the composition doesn't seem chaotic at all. True, there are multiple elements of interest but in this case, that is what helps create a complex and intriguing photo.