lennart goldmann - geneva 0 Posted July 24, 2007 This one should be about atmosphere, and a touch of eroticism. Have I succeeded? Link to comment
various things 0 Posted July 24, 2007 as far as the atmosphere is concerned and the part above the table. As for the part below the table I believe it would be more atmospheric and to me even more erotic if the model a) would wear undies and/or b) keep her knees a little bit closer together. Nice work! Link to comment
vidisorin 0 Posted July 24, 2007 Intriguing....though a little overdone in PS....I think highlights/shadows...and/or curves.....maybe only some added grain would do the trick. As for the visual impact I find it dreamy....erotic and lustful in the good sense.... Best regards Link to comment
jfrey43 0 Posted July 24, 2007 I like the shot, could be a bit brighter or something to add to the photo, but I also think it is just a small subtle hint or eroticism. Nice work! Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted July 25, 2007 I like it as well, very creative photograph, Lennart. Link to comment
JPPhoto1664880217 5 Posted July 26, 2007 It has atmosphere, but I do not see the open crotch as even slightly erotic. It looks like she just gotten out of bed and has not completely awakened. She looks like she doesn't care that she is exposing herself. To be at all erotic, she needs to look like she wants to expose herself to the viewer. I do like the tension generated by both sides of the table, and I like the foto overall, it is very creative. Link to comment
milsu 0 Posted July 26, 2007 I think it is erotic exactly because she looks like she just gotten out of bed, has not completely awakened, and don't care she is exposing herself. If she would look like she wants to expose herself to the viewer, then you would get just a junk worthless porn. But I agree it would look even better with some kind of underwear, and with slightly more light and contrast. Link to comment
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