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I once read a theory, that the most erotic situations are, when clothes are on the verge of falling down... You confirm this theory with this picture, in fact showing nothing, but making a thrill out of it. Nice work!

Quite good, but here breaking the never-crop-joints-nor-fingers -thumbrule hurts. The angle is great. Interesting choice of rather shallow contrast - not saying it is bad or good. Conclusively, good.

I hadn't looked at these photos for awhile. And thought your comment was exactly what I was taught... but why didn't I keep her within frame. I had to check and see if I had taken the photo the way it was presented. I had not, so you tell me if the original frame is better.

Ok, it is hard to say which one is really better. The then cropped hand in the original doesn't look good. I think the keys points are the curly hair, her eyes and her breast. Frankly, it this was mine I'd feel a bit frustrated because it is so close and yet you can not rectify that little bad luck with the hand. Now that I look at it again I also think the shoulder area looks a bit too massive - the light is perhaps a little too flat there. Still, I'd say this is a good one. YOuo must rmember that mostly the commenting/critiquing is just futile observations on some futile details.