kentr 0 Posted July 15, 2007 i hope you won't mind me saying, but i think this picture interests me more than almost any other in your portfolio. it seems like a well-realized attempt to describe a rather ordinary place, and the girl on the scooter gives me a narrative thread to play with. i imagine that details not apparent here, shapes of leaves for instance, would serve to make a print of this image very rewarding for interested viewers. as for possible imrovements, i might prefer to have less sky and more foreground. the tilt of the signpost and utility poles is a little distracting for me, and the central portion of the sky seems to have been overexposed anyway. Link to comment
raddatzphoto 0 Posted July 15, 2007 points well taken, Kent. I worried any toying would cause a ingredient loss of "moment" Link to comment
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