ldavidson 4 Posted July 13, 2007 Any comments, critiques, advice is welcome. Thank you. Link to comment
amirali 1 Posted July 13, 2007 In my opinion I think you should cut the buttom left of the photo , in the compositional point of view it is considered unused space and this is not one of those spaces which make us think :) this is just my opinion , I hope it would be helpful :) Link to comment
mk1 0 Posted July 13, 2007 lovely fun capture. I personally would crop left and bottom and focus on the children Link to comment
ixograndpa 0 Posted July 13, 2007 .. to crop or not to crop ?.. hehe ! That is your option. If this is mypix, I would probably face the same problem too. Maybe I will not , becauseI would lost much detail of the water. What happened here by the way ? Link to comment
ldavidson 4 Posted July 13, 2007 Thank you, and thanks for taking the time to comment. Link to comment
ldavidson 4 Posted July 13, 2007 Thanks for looking and commenting, I appreciate it. Hmmmm, I guess you have a point about the cropping, and all of you can't be wrong. I will have to try it with a tighter crop. I love the colour and light on the wadding pool's floor, I found it hard to cut out. Cederico, These were just kids playing in the water. The two older ones were there first, the little guy went up to them see what was going on. They very kindly showed him the water gun and they talked to him. I thought it was sweet. Best Regards, Linda Link to comment
andrea allison 0 Posted July 14, 2007 Hey! that's where I have been hanging out Linda, not this Spray Park , but one here. Trying to keep cool. Love the color and composition. Nice mood! Kind Regards Andrea Link to comment
jeffl7 0 Posted July 15, 2007 Linda. To each his or her own. I wouldn't change a thing. Those glorious blues add such depth to the photo and are a refreshingly abstract way of reiterating that these children are surrounded by water and fun. Link to comment
Donna Stavis 0 Posted July 19, 2007 Wonderfully fun and alive composition. I love the colors and the reflections in the water. Link to comment
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