by Sobering Geoff

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Published: Thursday 12th of July 2007 03:41:14 PM


Geoff Sobering

I'm curious what people think of the relative tone in the chocks vs. the background elements. I've been playing around with making the board darker or lighter to alter it's contribution as a "negative space" element.

The cropping is another aspect I can't seem to get completely happy with. There is a bit of image outside this cropping below and to the left, with quite a bit on the right (an 8x10 crop from a 3:2 frame). The feeling of the image seems to change dramatically with the placement of the chocks relative to the lower left of the frame.

Any suggestions, critique, etc. Thanks!

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