Fruit seller

Thanks for your time.

Very nice use of shape, what with the curved line that draws the viewer's eye down to the face. There are a few elements missing here, though. You've titled the picture fruit seller but I don't see any fruit or any selling happening. Maybe it's just a matter of changing the title. Also, and this is pure opinion, I think this might work better if you chopped a bit off the bottom in order to make the mouth more of a center of attention. If it were my photo, I'd crop it just below the chin. In any case, good work and I'd like to see more.

Marina, very nice, arresting; the gentle color, the mystery of what is not shown, and the beauty of what is. Surely a winner. Regards, Bernie

My English is quite poor, and that refrains me from writing the title I?d would like, and I use to choose one or two simple words.

 

About the crop, I?d try many different compositions and this one is what I like best, but all of then around the hat. I agree with you about your suggestion of ennhancing the lips.

Aunque no se ven las frutas para vender no importa, la imagen es lo suficientemente sugerente para que no imprte el titulo. Muy bien realizada, se ve que no envejeces nada.

Esta me parece muy buena, es muy buena. Sencilla y simple en composicion y realizacion pero con un gran guion.