Cleaning up...

Sonny Bryan's Barbecue, Alliance Center, Fort Worth, Texas, U.S.A.

This is a nice street shot that tells a very simple and basic truth we all ignore everyday. Nicely seen. I'm sure you'll agree the image quality could be imprved. Therefore, I hesitate to rate the picture, but simply wish you could get better equipment and continue to see scenes like this one and react to them. Therein lies the path of your development. Good luck.

It is quite ok, good scene, decisive moment amd such. Placing the main subject dead centre is not so good for this type of scene, though. Also I would recommend to tone down the bright background a bit, and bring up your main subject. B/W would work very well in this photo.

Regarding better equipment, I'm taking donations for a Leica M8. :)

 

This kind of work just takes a rangefinder. I've done it with my Canon 5D but it

is just too loud and draws too much attention.