Serena

First experience with studio flash. Your critiques and advices are welcome

Well you mastered the studio light very quickly if this is your first attempt. You also have a nice black background which we don't often see with beginners who ahe to make due with a home studio and creased sheets as background. There is no evidence of that here. You must have access to a professional studio I guess. Well done.

Like it very much...superb light and contrast with background...congrats

WOnderful contrast and skin tone...superb shot...

Great capture and love the tones and contrast, Massimo!! Bravo!

 

Best regards!

Yes, very well done, bravo. I have yet even to attempt a studio light ... :-)

Bella posa, inquadratura perfetta ed eccellente bianconero. Ottimo lavoro!

The black background (with some light on it) works well with the light skintones.

It's a good "shot" with the added bonus of being sexy...

I don't care for the jewelry, though - it draws the viewer's attention to it directly, but doesn't add much to the whole.

Specifically, the armband just doesn't belong...

With a bare 'everything else', they really shouldn't be there. Try airbrushing them out & see how it looks - I think the image would be much more striking.

As for the pose... wow! Nice...

...shame about the hands, though... :> (sorry, just HAD to say it...)

 

uno dei piu bei ritratti di una donna, posa morbida ma dinamica, sensualissima senza nulla svelare, bella angolatura nel fotogramma, buon uso degli spazi, una luce morbida ma decisa, bel lavoro di stylist, (perch蠩 bracciali, il fiocco, e la morbidezza dei capelli, completano la figura della modella). Direi che hai fatto un gran capolavoro. Bravo 7/7. M