wedding Bride

Sergy,

It's a great start. Probably would get higher marks if a couple of faults were squared away. 1) Train of dress is buckeled, 2) far elbow should be posed to not be seen (breaks line of figure), 3) Face is not light enough to draw attention. My eye is not natuarlly drawn to face area. Perhaps a bounced flash into the deck would have aided. My eye wanders trying to find the subject in the scene. Of course I wasn't there and don't know the full circumstances you were under. Nice Pic.