fabiocapoccia 0 Posted April 27, 2007 [Click enlarge for best view....] Critiques and/or remark are appreciated thanks Fabio Link to comment
leon_schnell 0 Posted April 27, 2007 Crikey. When you have a model like that, you're guaranteed to not have a bad photo. More constructively, although I like the balance between the model on the right and the walkway on the left, the receding walkway competes with the model for attention. Even though the walkway is blurred out I still find myself staring down it, and then when there's nothing there I have to return to the model. If you could find something to put at the end of the walkway that adds meaning to the model, and perhaps use a deeper depth of field (though not necessarily), it might be stronger overall. Just my thoughts. Link to comment
zigzag 0 Posted April 27, 2007 Beaut, sultry model with overbright walkway. This looks like a good advertising setup where the LHS takes the copy and the model holds the page. The left shoulder looks a bit isolated. Link to comment
les 11 Posted April 27, 2007 Actually, I think that the out-of-focus area on the Left kind of dominates the picture - I would trim it a bit to bring the face more to the center of the image - but that's just me :) Link to comment
gary_taylor4 0 Posted April 27, 2007 if only all the girls would look at you like that! apart from fashion and model photographers. Why i don't photograph beautiful women for a living i'll never know! great photograph, speaks out! Link to comment
elielid 0 Posted April 27, 2007 Mi piace moltissimo questo ritratto ambientato. Sembra essere stato studiato alla perfezione: Lo sguardo della ragazza (forse unica pecca la ciocca di capelli sull'occhio destro), la postizione della ragazza in sezione aurea, e la bellissina prospettiva del ponte, il tutto condito da un'ottimo uso della profonditࠤi capo. Eh si devo proprio dire che mi piace questo ritratto. Eli:-)) Link to comment
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