Priest and Server Asperging the Church and Congreration

Part of the Pascal Mass service in the Roman Catholic Church. Shoot

with available light with Epson R-D1 and Nokton 35/1.2 at ISO1600.

There are too many distracting elements to this image. It takes away from the main subjects (which would be the priest and alter boy). I would have cropped it so it lowers the ceiling, and removes most of the background elements to the left, but leaves in the cross for effect.

I would have tried to take this shot from the front of the subjects because it is always more interesting to see peoples faces rather than the back of their heads (that's why NHL players have helmets that do not protect their faces well).

Example:

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/190/483950492_253381e50b.jpg?v=0