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tomascastelazo

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Tomas,

 

It's an interesting subject matter in the first place: death. Never a fun thing to observe or come across in our daily lives. But it is always a stark reality that we can not run, or in this case fly, from. You get thumbs up for the subject.

 

As a photograph i think it's missing a few elements that would make this stand out more than photographed road kill. First, the levels and contrast can be adjusted to lighten the photo up a little. Second, i would try bumping the saturation to bring out more of the red in the blood and the yellow in the beak. Also, adjust the Sharpening of the photo. Which brings me to the last part of the photo: the composition. I think it would be more effective had you placed the bird more towards the right side of the frame. This would then have given more room on the left side, thus forming a chaos vs order play to the photograph. I've attached a version of the my suggestions.

 

With all of that being said, thank you for the photo. It makes one think...

 

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