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comments welcome

The composition implies movement which is good, the DOF separation is also good, without highlights and giving a clear delineation. On my monitor it looks as if you have some unwelcome blur around the orange highlights. The detractor for me is the darkness around the eye area which is where the eye should be drawn to. Other than that it's a 'straight shot' which could possibly be given added interest with some added body curl. Could also try a crop with more space in front than behind.