After the shift - Chartier, Paris 2007

This is a great moment. I would reccommend simply croping to a square format keeping the clock above but losing the coke bottle below. The tighter veiw

lets the veiwer see what your subject is. I like the color.It is that warm yellow of incandescent light which I often prefer to cold and indifferent flash. You could take out some yellow for the color purists.

sincerely

andrea