Guest Guest Posted April 1, 2007 This is a wonderful portrait of very great exposure , details, contrast and tone Wishing you alll of the best Link to comment
jan_piller 0 Posted April 2, 2007 I will critique my friend. You achieved such beautiful tones and light with this image but two things stand out greatly for me even though I do not do portraiture myself. The pose of the girl seems very contrived and not natural and almost too seductive for such a young girl. The other thing is her very dry lips - some gloss would have softened them up greatly - carrying a small tube in your camera bag would remedy any situation like that.Please take no offense at my critique - my hope is that it would be helpful to you. Regards, Link to comment
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