Un ave que soño ser hombre

Thanks for your time

hello

 

this shot shows a good sense for "instant" but it needs a little afterwork

 

on the whole it's greyish, a little work on levels makes it look better

 

it also lacks sharpness.

 

the composition would be better if the man had more space OR if he didn't stand right under a pole (which means YOU should have moved to the left)

 

one flaw that cannot be corrected is the light: this photo was shot in full daylight wasn't it?

Otra buena composicion, y muy buena esa alegoria sobre el ave que decido ser hombre :-), pero sigo sintiendo una falta de fuerza en los contrastes...