Essi leaning

comments appreciated as usual

Hi Olli, A beautifully stunning picture. Her basic black and white outfit works so well with the background's muted colors. Here is a suggestion. I would crop-off the tree at the right just along its left trunk line. This would still leave the well-out-of-focus limbs and they would be part of the framing as they lean in towards the main subject. Or, just leave the picture alone, as is. Either way, a great picture. Well done.

 

--Roger

Sound use of the DOF. This lets us aprreciate few colors on the wall just behind where she stands. Sharp focus on the model revealing details on her trench and lower leggings. No doubt, a nice model well photographed.

Mun mielesta tassa kuvassa toi syvateravyyspalkki alkaa olemaan jo liian ohut. Katsojan (tavallinen sukankuluttaja) on tosi vaikeaa tajuta etta miksi etu-ala ja taka-ala on noin epateravaa. Toi noin lyhyt syvateravyysalue voi toimia jossain keskivartalolahiksessa mut tas tota efektia alkaa olemaan liikaan varsinkin tossa vasemmalla puolella aidassa joka johdattaa katseen kohteeseen. Pienella himmennyksella vois paasta luonnollisempaan lopputulokseen. Mita mielta itse oot?