Melissa and Organza

Thanks.

The picture is good, but, IMHO:

1. Her expression is too hard

2. The shot is a little over exposed (1/2 a point?)

3. Her hair doesn't work that well for me

 

Please take this constructively!

 

Regards,

Roberto

 

 

Beautiful lighting and pose. I think the light is perfect, I see good details in the white on my screen. Her look is a bit interesting, which makes for a captivating image.

I'm with Alex. This is absolutely fine. My only niggle is I would like to see a very slight amount of space between her right hand and the frame edge. As it is, I get the feeling it is too tight.

David is right: Some space between her hand and the frame would be much better.

I love her hair and her expression. She is a beautiful model.

Stunning shot.