Yvonne 1

Comments and Rating always welcome.

Doug, this is a very sensuously handled portrait. You've conveyed a lot of softness, especially with the depth of field you've used and how you've captured the skin. I love the way her eyes each look out from the side. The far eye being out of focus gives this a dreamy feel. My only problem would be the shadow on the close side of her face. It may be a little strong and, therefore, a little unflattering. I think you could keep the same dramatic effect but not be so severe in the shadowing.

Good comment. I agree that the lighting could have been brighter on the shadow side. I think it may have been better just to have the focus on the lighted eye. Thanks.

I'm not so sure it would have been better to have the focus on the far eye, Doug. I think you definitely want it closer. A big white card reflecting some of that side light might do the trick to even out the shadow. As it is, the sidelight creates a mood of mystery and sensualness as was mentioned before. My nitpick on this is the blur seems to have been done with photoshop as opposed to using a wide aperture, or maybe a soft focus lens. The portrait itself is lovely, though.

Very good portrait, soft light, soft focus! Best regards, Catalin

very rich skin texture and good,ol' classic dof.a little unusual portrait but excellent in its unicity.really good work,sir.congrats.