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I agree that a b/w version might be preferable. Otherwise, to make the image stick more, some more play with light and dark could be edited in with Photoshop. Perhaps it wouldn't be bad to make those doors really jump out, while saturating the whole a little more, and perhaps darkening the sides ever so lightly. I'm also ever so lightly bothered by the grass in the foreground. Maybe a wider angle could have been used, I'm not sure. Anyway, I would be curious as to see a b/w version.

Please Citique!

Good composition but I think you should try a b/w version

I adore the subtle color treatment and subject matter. IMHO this image is all about color and requires it to stand up compositionally. Beautiful work James.