In Bed

Critiques Please!

My only wish is that this was to be taken with the D80. D200 makes odd colouring to my taste...Maybe this is the reason for the slight desaturate ? Her feet seem weirdy positioned yet the angle flatters her...I like this very much! (no rate just comments today)

It is desaturated for artistic effect, not color. Note that I usually modify the white balance, the contrast curve, and sometimes the color curves themselves on my work.

I like this photo but also have a problem with the desaturation (deliberate or not). My personal preference (and I do recognize it as just that) is to either go full color or desaturate to B/W. But I agree it is a flattering pose for the model. The only other thing, very minor, I'd recommend is a slight crop on the left so that the black goes all the way to the end of the frame. Regards, Allen

Great series. Your poses are great. Love to see more!

you mean like this? (see attached)

Yes, I think that is much better.