Alex

Go ahead..., I can take it.

nice pic..but i would prefer more clearance at the right.

Nice details and good light , but I agree with Amit: more space on the right will give the picture a less gloomy feel (She is stuck in the corner with nothing to look forward to), and I would remove the piece of clothing on the right shoulder.

I totally disagree with the above comments. They are only refecting the normal, safe, overdone to the point of cliche' point of view of the masses.

 

An artist knows when to break the fossilized rules of composition.

 

I wouldn't change a thing.

She's perfectly placed. I yearn to know what she's looking at.

 

Cheers.

Don't chanage a thing, it's perfect. She has such a great profile...

I totally agree that the off balance composition really works! a very strong image, well done!!

I love the composition, and the details in the hairs. Strong image =)

What a graphic shot. I like the placement. Regards, Maria

elke diertje zijn pleziertje

The placement to the right speaks intentional. Its perfect

this is art not a portrait!