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Would like to hear thoughts on this image, and ways to improve it in the future. Thanks

Very nice composition with the dark and lightning on the model contrast. Very nice colours.

My only remark, and I hope it's not just my eyes (...), it tend to be very erotic, and I don't know if you meant it like that Chris. For a fashion swimmwear I think it should be less provocative (!) Just an opinion. Great work

I like the picture. Composition good, colors and shadows good. TOO erotic I dont think so very nice. The one thing I dont like is the expression on the models face. thats all. other than that yout foto is good. 6/6

Yeah, I would recommend not shooting between her legs for a swimwear shot. Another common "rule" is not to shoot the body straight on, it's usually more flattering at an angle.

Thank you for your comments. I'm taking all the suggestions onboard. I didn't intend for this to be an erotic shot, but maybe it just turned out that way. At least I'm starting to get my lighting sorted, so now need to work more on model direction and getting more expression or emotion. Thanks again for the comments.