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La Boca


amitai schwartz

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Street

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The colors in this are a lot like a collage, and putting in this amount of the shot is a little risky IMHO. I would isolate some of the shapes and colors, come in closer and show the contrasts without overwhelming the shot. You could make four or fives shots just from different crops of this larger one. I would love to see you try different crops, and then repost. You have an amazing eye for what's out there.
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I'd leave it as is. I assume you intended it as a scene, conveying a story, not as an abstract. Great colors and geometry, and composition.
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Thank you both for your thoughtful comments. Jennifer, I appreciate your insight and critical eye. I greatly admire your work. However, as Fred observed, this really is meant as a street scene. It is what I saw. The incongruity of it, the colors and shapes, are what made the scene interesting to me.
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