I increased the contrast following Kaushik's suggestion, but his version is still better than mine .. see below

by Peri John

i increased the contrast following kaushiks sugges nude seeking critique peri john

Gallery: Artistic Nudes in black and white 2

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Category: Nude and Erotic

Published: Thursday 15th of February 2007 05:18:40 PM


Comments

Michael Meneklis
Gentlemen... Bravo to both of you. That's the difference in human behavior beteween HQ people and...

John Peri
Kaushik, without any hesitation, I prefer your rendering. Many thanks. I was just about to to withdraw this photo, however your proposal is worth retainining. Can you post it a little smaller so that it appears on this page? It just demonstrates the interest once again of posting unsatisfactory work where specialists can make constructive criticism. Many thanks again.

Kaushik Chatterjee
7/7
John, Excellent pose, light and the composition. But I would prefer the BG in full black. Meaning no disrespect, just adding my view. Never mind Sir.

Alberto Quintal
So beautiful! Alberto

Michael Meneklis
Lightning Harmony in synthesis, pose and grey tones . Do not worry about hair . If we are in a dark room like this we can't see the hair but only the lightning of her beauty.

Kaushik Chatterjee
Thank you John, . . . I am really honored Sir. Best Regards.

John Peri
Kaushik, it is I that thank you for your observation and am grateful for your attention. I will change the original.

Tore Nilsson
I like this one, the composition is great and the greyscale is nice too. Best regards Tore

Markos George Hionos
!! regards .

Txipiri Pancracio
Hola John Me gusta mucho su foto. No obastante y a pesar de que el contraste entre el cuerpo y el fondo otorgan un especial ambiente al fotograma, entiendo que hay excesivas zonas sin informacion. Puede que ahi radique la magia de esta foto que en su conjunto es muy atractiva. Saludos cordiales.

John Peri
Figure study No excuses, I would have preferred to have the model's hair more visible, it's a failing, but I use a flash attached to the camera and it s difficult to dose the output correctly.

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