Girl speaking on the phone.

Please comment on composition.

Tutor, I think the outfit could show a little more to help tell the story of why here face is painted and maybe why she is on thephone. Nice focus on the eyes, great color, nice lighting. Thank you for showing it.

I agree with Emma. My first impression was, "why is she on the phone?" Also, the bed post in the background to camera right is distracting. Nice color and lighting.

Interesting juxtaposition.

I bet she'll grow if you lit her up with blacklight!!! The brown looking thing is the background was quite distracting...

Is she a Mets fan?

What is the story behind this? Nice picture.