arash khoshghadam 0 Posted January 31, 2007 Very nice and graphic. Smart of you to include those swimming birds in the foreground. They provide the first point for eye contact since they are grouped and have created unity in that area. the emphasis on the motifs is through position, shape and tonal contrast, and the fact that there are two boats which repeate each other's shape compositionally generating a powerful gravity for the optical movement in that direction ( specially since they are contrasted against the sillhouetting vegetation in the background. The composition you have arranged has formidable balance ( balance through contast, shape, texture). I just wish the sillhouetting background vegetation were complete to blot out a few structures that stand out of the darkness in that area since the next optical movement could be on a clear diagonal path toward those graphic clouds identical in number with the boats and offering a powerful attraction due to their painted diagonally across the sky, but those somewhat obtrusive structures cause a momentary deviation of the visual flow. The entire composition of your shot works wonder and I enjoy it very much. Link to comment
julio_segura_carmona1 4 Posted February 1, 2007 Excelente imagen de gran belleza, perfecta luz B/W, gran encuadre y una magnifica composicion, saludos cordiales Dan. Link to comment
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