Melissa II

Thanks for your comments, I want to do it better.

The armrest on the right is kind of distracting to me, or could be used to hide a fill card/reflector to get a brighter catch light on her eyes. Still a great shot.

A great shot, but you can improve it.

Try to shoot it without the armrest, that is distracting. And you should tyr to use a fill flash. In tis way you brigtjen up the shades and give some more light on the eye parts.

Keep on shooting, you will get there.

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