paula grenside 0 Posted January 26, 2007 Excellent composition; The twisted tree lead the eye in this scene. Veru effective in B&W. Link to comment
LenMarriott 9 Posted January 26, 2007 Paula, Thank you for your views. Much appreciated. To me, these stunted hardwoods nicely filled the beautiful blue but otherwise boring sky area. When converted to B&W it is my preferred version. Best, LM. Link to comment
Landrum Kelly 64 Posted January 27, 2007 I really enjoy these, Len. In the Carolinas, espeically South Carolina, there is a band of sandy soil (the "Sand Hills") that runs through the center of the state: http://www.uga.edu/srel/sandhills.htm In certain sections of that sandy belt there are stands of huge pines, but in other areas there are oak barrens that look a lot like this, or both side by side. I now find such country intriguing, although I once found it boring. There are also interesting flowering plants that grow very low on the ground in this region, and I have not seen some of these anywhere else. --Lannie Link to comment
greg mccracken 13 Posted January 27, 2007 Great BW Len! Ansell would be impressed! That's a great twisted oak. It seems to be pointing out over the lake. I studied the whites and blacks closely and you've nicely balanced the contrasts with some pure white specular highlights and just enough blacks to give it that oompf that Ansell's photos have. Even in the BW it is apparent how beautiful (albeit cold) that day was! Excellent work! Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted January 28, 2007 Len, my vote is as well for the B/W conversion. I like the touch of the curved tree on both trees on the right and left, like trees " fraternity", really beautiful.The empty sky enhances that touch.I like the sight of layers from FG till the sky. I was not sure about the tree on the left, but trying to crop it, I have found that it is needed for a better ballance of composition... Link to comment
carsten_ranke 0 Posted January 28, 2007 The half tree @the left border is indeed ok. A very nice motif, well composed and exposed, best in B&W, right. The twisted tree makes a nice diagonal and leads the eyes. The background scenery interacts a bit with the foreground, it would be interesting to see how it looks with less DOF. Link to comment
LenMarriott 9 Posted January 28, 2007 Pnina, Thanks for your valued opinions. Yeh, even when composing I couldn't get rid of the tree on the left so I made it a part of the composition. Argueably, I could have included even more of it but thought the minimal approach best at the time. Best, LM. Link to comment
LenMarriott 9 Posted January 28, 2007 Carsten, thanks for your (much appreciated) vote of confidence. Playing with DOF on these scenics is really tricky. I didn't play with it here but on another, one of a yellow coloured pine sappling, I tried it but preferred the sharper overall version. Didn't like the soft background. Will post my favourite soon. Best, LM. Link to comment
LenMarriott 9 Posted February 12, 2007 I came across this scene on a recent trip to the Torrance Barrens. Thought it worth investing a frame. Your comments\critiques will be gratefully received. Best, LM. Link to comment
jan_piller 0 Posted February 27, 2007 I love this tree - it looks almost zen-oriental - I would be tempted to try to isolate it and the rock with a black background (not that I have a clue how to do that!)I am a colour fan but this makes an excellent b/w too. Link to comment
LenMarriott 9 Posted March 1, 2007 Jan, It was the distorted shape that initially drew my attention. I suppose I could have shot this close to wide open to soften the background in an attempt to isolate the trees and I will keep that in mind for the next trip. I was already using a polarizing filter adjusted to the max to darken the sky as much as possible. I love colour too but just thought the B&W version with it's emphasis on shapes, tones, & textures did a better job .... for me. Happy to see you like both. Best, LM. Link to comment
rebekah1 0 Posted August 10, 2007 Len: It is only out of my love for bonsai trees that I thought I would try to clone out the other trees. I love your photo in color and BW as it is but thought I would try a rough-draft just for fun. Link to comment
LenMarriott 9 Posted August 11, 2007 Rebekah, Your cloning skills have certainly changed this composition (in a positive way). My solution included the use of a chain saw but the Parks Department frowns on this option. :-) Many thanks for going the extra mile on this one. Best, LM. Link to comment
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