south east asia Street Portrait, Yangon, Myanmar

Need some feedback, please...

I really enjoy this photo - the palette, lighting, composition, but it the extremely shallow DOF bothers me. I like the hair and shoulders soft, but it is distracting for me that his nose is out of focus. That's a fairly small detail though, I really appreciate your approach to portraiture on the street.

Sergey, I love the sharpness on his forehead and parts of his beard. But I too am not fond of how his nose is blurred. I do wish there was a bit more lighting.

I like this portrait very much, but yes, his nose became its cetral part.

If your focus area is a little larger than it...it could be a grat picture Sergey...good shot....regards...

I am still sure that paper-thin DOF is appropriate decision here - the intention was to illustrate some raw life power in this guy, not handsomness :)

As the nose attract some unwanted attention - may be some burning will help - like this: