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Me convence el movimiento de la protagonista, es como si estuviera nerviosa o porque se va a casar o porque no puede abrocharse la falda. Tambien la imagen se puede prestar a confusion, pues no se sabe si la muchacha se va o viene. Muy buen BN.

Rating? Comments?

Functional style with emphasis on form. The girl putting on wedding gown is so engrossed in what she is doing. The motif is leveled and displays movement with hands in motion blur. The two vertical elements on both sides have framed her figure having created contrast in shape- the mere straightness against contoured figure. The contrast draws our eyes instantly to the motif.

With appropriate exposure, the wide range of tonality has boosted the realism of the shot.

The only drawback that can be mentioned is the distance. According to Robert Coppa " if your shot isn't good enough, you aren't close enough." I think Madeleine could take this shot from a closer distance to limit the frame to fewer elements. The doorway with its highlight on the right is extremely distracting. I actually had a hard time to keep my eyes focused on the motif and keep them from wandering off toward the doorway or the objects on the extreme left edge the importance of which I can't understand in association with the motif.

Other than that this shot works for me. I like the exulting emotion in this shot. The happiness, the prediction of an all-out wedding ceremony.

I really like this photo! I disagree about the door. In fact, if I were to find anything "distracting", it would be the circular object to the left. But none of that really bothers me. I am undecided about the blur though. I realize it was deliberate but I feel that it detracts more that it adds to the photo.

Very emotive image, the movement captures for me the urgency of probably running late for the big day, technically the doorway is distracting, however it places the subject in her environment. I love it.