At The Top

Is my subject at the top of the stairs too dark and small to be seen?

I think it would be better with a person wearing white, or I could

digitally retouch? Any opinions?

Great detail and tone.

I agree with the comment on the detail and tone. Also, the people add scale to the size of this place

I like the image except that you've drawn my attention to the individual at the top of the stair; if you've intended him/her to be a focal point of the image I don't think you've succeeded as s/he is swallowed up in the background, and may be simply too small. Great image otherwise!

I agree with the lead into the guy at the top of the stairs. I think it would have been better to have the guy in white there (like you could control that). Although the people in the corner add scale I do think that they detract from the image - almost like a bush in landscapes.

 

This is great, beyond me!

Thanks for the encouraging comments! This building is a site that requires repeated visits over time to exploit the photo possibilities. The light can be amazing. I am planning to try both Delta 100 and Agfa Scala there soon. I'm blessed to live in an area that overflows with photo ops. (DC).