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Hi Jack

The headroom is good in your shot, but I have two questions: why such a horizontal

frame that has included objects I can't understand the presence of? and if they do contribute ( I doubt ) why have you placed the girl in the middle of the frame which is aesthetically proven to be an inferior place compared to the golden means.? In my version, I have done a vertical 13 X 18 cm crop plus some simplifiction of the background.