Lisa again

critiques appreciated!

Great shot, looks like a spontaneous burst of laughter during a photo shoot. Her friends on the sidelines teasing her? :-) Love the color and light, Beautiful model that's having fun. Happy Holidays to you and your Loved ones.

Let me say first that I do not have a studio and have only taken portraits in natural light. This picture should have been better. Maybe it is in a smaller size, as it is, after only a few seconds I see things that bother me.

1) Harsh smile lines around nose and mouth

2) Distracting undergarment and wrinkles in blouse

3) Teeth are very uneven with a lot of gum

 

All of these can be avoided. I've seen some of your other shots - you know how to fix these things.

 

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Wonderful Jim .. we are missing a backstage file from you .. : -)