thorley 0 Posted December 9, 2006 She is fantastic but the back ground dose not complement i.m.o Link to comment
michael lyons 0 Posted December 9, 2006 I agree--it would help a little if the background was level-----the model is incredible--ML Link to comment
cdaunis 0 Posted December 10, 2006 There's a background? :) The verticals left and right of the bookshelf are straight, but the bookshelf is not. Are they leaning toward the weight of beauty? Link to comment
pjmeade 12 Posted December 10, 2006 It's good to see that she's not just a pretty face Link to comment
John Peri 1,007 Posted December 10, 2006 Thanks everyone. Did look a little strange. I have now corrected the original folllowing your comments. Maybe I should put the corrected version at the top of this page and leave the one you critiqued here .... many thanks for the remarks which allowed me hopefully to improve this photo. Link to comment
mmene 0 Posted December 11, 2006 Excellent pose and grey tones. The model is perfect. Bravo John. Mixalis. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted December 11, 2006 I like her white skin tone dear John, she looks like a Doll :) Biliana Link to comment
Doug Keller 0 Posted December 30, 2006 This is nice. I like the symbolism (too): the window illuminating like books can; and the teat succouring like books can. I also like the hand gesturing to caress the books ... cuz we luv 'em ... which is probably better than the more prosaic (I suppose) pose with her reading from an open book (which woulda been interesting, too ... though prosaic, again). Maybe if she had the book opened and upside-down up top her head? Might add another element to an otherwise beautiful effort ... a wee bit o' fun. Well done. *applauds like at a golf game* :-) Link to comment
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